Title: Available Darkness (Episode 3)
Author: Sean Platt and David Wright
Series: Available Darkness (Season 1)
Publisher: Collective Inkwell
Read Type: Author request
This book can be purchased from Amazon (International) as a full series of 6.
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From the writers of the post-apocalyptic smash hit serial, Yesterday's
Gone, and Z 2134, comes Available Darkness, a new breed of vampire
The Darkness Has Awoken
FBI Special Agent Caleb Baldwin is on the hunt for a serial killer
who has left a trail of burned bodies. One of those victims — his wife.
As he gets closer to finding the killer, he falls deeper into an
A man wakes buried alive with no memory of who or what he is. In his
pocket, a note: “Avoid the sunlight and don’t touch anybody.” Now he is
being hunted by the FBI while trying to remember his monstrous past. He
must control the darkness within before it consumes him and the child
whose life he must protect.
11-year-old Abigail was dying slowly each day as the prisoner of a
sick man. Until she is saved by the most unlikely of heroes — a vampire
with a deadly touch. He is her only hope, and she may hold the key to
unlocking the memories of his hidden past.
Past, present, fate, and future are on a collision course as the
hours of AVAILABLE DARKNESS are ticking away and a force greater than
anything the world has ever seen threatens humanity.
Available Darkness is an epic serialized journey that reinvents
vampire mythology with a fast paced, character-driven thriller that
blends action, mystery, fantasy, and horror in an addictive, tragically
Together with co-authors David Wright and Johnny B. Truant, Sean has
written the series Yesterdays Gone, WhiteSpace, ForNevermore, Available
Darkness, Dark Crossings, Unicorn Western, The Beam, Namaste, Robot
Proletariat, Cursed, Greens, Space Shuttle, and Everyone Gets Divorced.
He also co-wrote the how-to indie book, Write. Publish. Repeat.
David W. Wright
David is also a cartoonist who is working on a children's book.
David blogs about writing and stuff he likes at his personal blog, and about his books at Collective Inkwell.
He lives on the east coast with his wife, seven-year old son, and the world's most poopingest cat.
Strong language: None
Violence: Yes, frequent
Sexual content: One instance, graphic
You can find links to all of my review of the series at the Available Darkness Archive
The authors gave out a free copy of season one of this serial in their newsletter as an apology for messing up details in the previous letter. I decided to read and review this. Despite having the entire first series, 6 episodes, at once in front of me, I will stick to no more than one a week the same as they are initially released in America.
This episode had a big explosive entrance, but I felt it was let down by its writing quality. To keep the fast pace of the writing the author's often described complex emotions in one word rather than giving it the richness it deserved by using systems such as show don't tell. However, a couple of chapters in this smoothed out to the writing level I am used to from these authors using phrases such as "hair half as wild as the look in his eyes."
There has been an FBI agent appearing throughout the series I have commented on not being able to connect with him. In this episode I was very pleased to finally make a connection as his story unfolded in a rather dramatic and traumatic way for him. I now look forward to reading his chapters in future episodes, rather than considering putting the book down when I come to them.
I also liked that this episode finally switched to darker tones, showing what the vampires are and what they can do. Having seen this my thoughts about where this series could be going have seriously expanded. I feel like up til now we'd only seen the tip of the iceberg, and there's still more to discover.
For me the one thing that stuck out in this episode as a striking difference to other vampire media at the moment was how it treats children in the line of fire. Rather than suddenly turning into a super ninja with no childhood fears or reservations, Abigail is still allowed to be a scared kid, feeling alone, messing up and ultimately sometimes putting the group in more danger instead of less. I expect her to harden as the series goes on, but I hope it is gradual and for good reason.
Apparently this was the end of part one of the series (I wasn't aware it was in parts) so will be interesting to see how the second part differs
The writing threw me a bit at the beginning of the episode, however it smoothed out as the story went along. This was action packed, yet it took time to let the characters take a breath and be themselves, not be their situation.
I give this 4 stars